Write to a friend about your new job.
1) explain why you decided to look for a new job.
2) Describe how you looked for a new job.
3) Describe your new job.
Hi Leena,
How are you? Hope you are doing well.
Do you remember? Last week, you were asking about my new job that I recently got in an MNC. I discussed with you two months back that I was not satisfied with my earlier HR job. Neither it was offering me new career opportunities to grow in my role nor was paying me well off as per the market standards. Therefore, I decided to change it. Cracking a job in an MNC was not a cakewalk; however, I managed to get it through my sheer hard work and references. Not only I uploaded my CV on various job portals but also personally contacted different HR heads through LinkedIn to get a spotlight on my résumé.
After giving various attempts, I can click this job. Now, I am working as a Senior Manager in an Accenture company. Here, I will handle three regions, including South, North & West, and I will be responsible for developing training and compensation programs for new joiners.
Just let me know If you need any details about it. I would be glad to address it.
Take care and see you soon.
Anika
- your former home county family is coming to see you in your home country and stay for a week. 1) make plan to meet them at convenient location 2)suggest date and time 3) suggest some activity you may all participate in during their visit. 84
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week.1) Describe where he will stay.2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. 73
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your place next week.1) Describe where he will stay.2) Explain the weather conditions3) Activities will do together. 78
- Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform? 78
- Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterdescribe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insurance company what you would like them to do 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55897435897 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59582591127 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682051282051 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9156714956 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275296970886 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827726034959 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602812855045 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124622108208 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600098234164 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.