Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends.
In your letter:
1. Thank them for the holiday and the photos.
2. Explain why you didn’t write earlier
3. Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Jimmy and Anna,
I hope you both are doing well and this letter reaches your healthy hands. How have you been?
It was great fun at your place during my overseas trip with my family and I truly believe that my last vacation wouldn’t have been that successful if visiting your house for a week was not part of it.
First of all, I’d like to thank you for sharing all the photos in my dropbox having cherished all our memories with you both and your family and places we visited together when I was at your place. It was a wonderful vacation I can ever have in my life and I am extremely thankful for your efforts to make it more heavenly.
My utmost apologies for writing so late as it was quite busy at work throughout this month after such a long and wonderful vacation. I had to complete two months of work in just one month to match the work sequence with ongoing progress.
I would like to invite you to my place and spent some time with my family and experience our culture too. I really wish that you will give me this opportunity to serve you.
I hope you consider planning your upcoming vacation in my country and wish that you will spend at least two weeks with me and my loved ones.
Best Regards:-
Karan Gulati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... family and experience our culture too. I really wish that you will give me this ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... me this opportunity to serve you. I hope you consider planning your upcomin...
^
Line 27, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ones. Best Regards:- Karan Gulati
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, well, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45922746781 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23209802651 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4247621309 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281877574221 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117955262985 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597279827203 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139959566278 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746910234441 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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