Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
explain what has happened
describe the bag and its contents
say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request for your assistance. I am Safa Mustafa, a passenger who boarded the flight CZ1234 from Texas to Dubai. My flight was on 27th December 2020 10.45 PM.
I believe when I fell asleep during the flight the bag must have slipped from my seat and fell on the floor. Due to the rush of boarding another flight and going through all the processes, I failed to notice that the bag is missing until I was at the hotel.
Nevertheless, the bag will be easy to spot due to its leopard print. There is a key chain dangling on one of the zippers with my initials, i.e. SM. Inside the bag there is a Canon 7D DSLR camera and a detachable lens.
May I request you to courier me the bag to the Hilton hotel, Dubai as I will be staying here for a fornight. Also, please provide a label on it as fragile as it is really precious to me. I would be happy to refund any courier charges.
Thank you for your cooperation. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Safa Mustafa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25128205128 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35129183791 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0532083147 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.2142857143 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241505726775 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752995910064 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694521149276 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125593464954 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701732550118 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.