Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
explain what has happened
describe the bag and its contents
say what you would like them to do about this problem
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My name is Duyen Le, a royalty member of your airline service. My frequency airline number is 08999778HCM. Recently, I took a flight to London, which has a flight number as BA90003 from Ho Chi Minh city on January 15th, 2023. It would have been a wonderful flight experience if I did not unintendedly leave my bag on my seat chair. As I had a stomachache when the airplane arrived London's airport, I had to rush to get off the plane and forget to check my belongings. It was not until my arrival at the hotel that I found out about my missing bag.
My bag was full of memories because it was my first achievement after graduate. I even called her " Good memory" to remind me of how much hard I work to be where I was. The bag was from the famous Louis Vuitton company and was made completely of feather. It was black with my name "Dr. Duyen Le" written on the front. Inside it, there was my travel book, a pen, my ID and my photos of my trip to Canada.
I would be very grateful if you could spare your time to look for my bag and send it back to me. If there was any chance that the flight attendants found my bag which I describe above, please send my an email to confirm and I will be at the address to reconfirm and receive my loving bag. If there was no information about it, please let me know.
Once again, please respond to me as soon as possible
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully,
Duyen Le
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22775800712 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41518270188 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8559272709 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157464482752 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598866273314 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474143109266 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935234908589 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656974787739 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.