Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends He she has informed you that they will be traveling near to your home town on business in a few months time Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you In your letter say how pleased

Essay topics:

Last year you met someone on holiday and became friends. He/she has informed you that they will be traveling near to your home town on business in a few months' time.
Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter
say how pleased you are to hear from them
invite them to stay with you
tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together

Dear Sam,

It's been almost a year, and we haven't seen each other. Anyway, I'm so glad to hear in your letter that you'll be coming to New Delhi for a business trip in the next three months. So, I'm writing today to invite you to stay at my home while you'll be engage in your business trip in my hometown.

Not only I'm so pleased to hear about your plans coming to my town, but also my family got happy to hear about the news because when I was on a vacation to your place in Netherlands, you made time for me and my family to show us exquisite destinations along with enjoying the luxury hospitality services provided by you and your family. So, It is my time to offer you the best homestay services at my villa.

We have a big guest room attached with its own bathroom in my home. You would get a private space to do your own work during weekdays. And, on weekends, I could show you some beautiful stunning views of the city along with different cultures and traditions of my country. Besides, you are a fan of eating different cuisines, so, I'll take you to the best restaurants for lunch and dinner during weekends, and on weekends, we will cook according to your desire choices of dishes at home. I'm hoping that you'll be accept my invitation to come to my place while spending your business trip in my town.

Looking forward to meet you soon.

Warm Regards,
Shwatank

Votes
Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, but, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40077821012 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33558994546 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.003848639 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28355714599 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10677948365 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649131978306 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180817779852 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474293256223 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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