Last year you went on a holiday with your family. A friend has contacted you about the holiday and asked whether you would recommend it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where you went and how you traveled describe the place and the accommodation suggest why your friend should or should not go on this holiday Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…
Dear Ahmed,
you can’t imagine how happy I was when I received your kind letter regarding your planning to visit egypt next month.
I’m writing to let you know that I stayed my vacation last year with my nuclear family in Sharm AL Sheikh province which is located on the western coast of the red sea, it was wonderful holiday, full of adventures and happiness, like safari in Sharm’s desert, Barbecue parties in its national park, diving in the red sea and many other entertainments.
Sure I recommend this kind of holiday for you and your family, especially nowadays where you can benefit from the current summer offers in hotels and shopping malls, I know one 5 stars hotel who will gives you 50% discounts on full accommodation next month and will organize unique tourist tour for you including visiting to landmarks, meals and transportations.
Please send my sincere greeting to all your family, see you soon in egypt.
Your best friend
Nader
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee you soon in egypt. Your best friend Nader
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01226993865 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68321985438 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730061349693 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.425799632 44.8134815571 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.4 76.5299724578 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.6 16.8248392259 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38249977683 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199031702873 0.0766984524023 259% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05152756566 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2058536681 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586210098631 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 8.37731958763 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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