Letter to council for the dirty street:Explain why it has become dirty recentlyWhat problem it has causedGiving some suggestions.

Essay topics:

Letter to council for the dirty street:
Explain why it has become dirty recently
What problem it has caused
Giving some suggestions.

Dear City Council,
I am writing this letter in reference to complain about heaps of garbage found on my street.I would like to explain to you that this has become a recent issue due to non-collection of garbage and cleaning of streets by contract cleaning staff. this staff is employed by the city council as part of clean city drive however due to a recent dispute on salaries and benefits the contract staff has gone on indefinite strike.

Due to this issue, there is always a foul smell on the street which is very irritating and has made our living in this area very difficult. It has also made walking on the street difficult as you can notice piles of garbage waste accumulating on the roadside.

I would like to suggest at this stage to the city council to send their permanent cleaning staff to our locality for a cleaning drive regularly till the contract staff concerns have been addressed as it will help to resolve our immediate concerns.

I look forward to your immediate response and assistance on the above.
Yours sincerely
Vinshu

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear City Council, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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...out heaps of garbage found on my street.I would like to explain to you that this ...
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Suggestion: This
... of streets by contract cleaning staff. this staff is employed by the city council a...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sistance on the above. Yours sincerely Vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76630434783 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53751972997 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4841915306 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968304512023 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038819980965 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431617071217 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044991421585 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338076869425 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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