Write a letter to the council for the dirty street:
Explain why it has become dirty recently
What problem it has caused
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is Ifeoluwa aransiola, and I reside at 5A Ogunaike street, Magodo, Kosofe local government area. I am writing to notify you of the untidy state of my street, after the recently concluded public event- which led to an unpleasant sight and a general foul smell in my neighbourhood.
I must commend all your contributions towards improving the living condition of the residents in the local government area. However, I have observed a general dirtiness of the street, due to not cleaning up after the recently concluded Eyo Festival. The whole street was littered with empty bottles, leftover foods, untrashed disposable plates, nylons ,spoons and so on.
This challenge has resulted in an eyesore and a strong unpleasant odour in the environment. As you will agree, these waste items could allow breeding of germs- leading to breakout of airborne diseases.
Based on the foregoing, I would suggest you assist in communicating with the committee for the carnival, to organise cleaning of my street immediately. Also, I recommend that the government should encourage all future events committee to ensure the area is cleaned up, after any event is held.
I look forward to a favourable response from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Ifeoluwa aransiola
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... event- which led to an unpleasant sight and a general foul smell in my neighbour...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the street, due to not cleaning up after the recently concluded Eyo Festival. The...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ods, untrashed disposable plates, nylons ,spoons and so on. This challenge has ...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
... government should encourage all future events committee to ensure the area is cleaned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137254902 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90902359919 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671568627451 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0055781235 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803894921606 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263360951938 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349563524037 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361380279629 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321748203349 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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