You bought a TV a week ago when you go home, you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.
Write a letter to the company and in your letter
1. Introduce yourself
2. Explain the problem
3. And state what action you would like from the company
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to report a fault in a television set which I bought recently from your electronic store. Let me explain in detail.
My name is Jack Sparrow, a local resident of Perth. I am a regular customer at your electronic store and have bought many home appliances in the past. Although my overall experience with your store has been positive however my last purchase of tv has changed my perception of your electronic store. To elucidate I bought a brand new LED 32 inch Toshiba smart tv from your store last week however when I reached home the television started giving problems with the wireless connectivity. After repeated failed attempts to fix the issue I called your customer service department to provide a resolution however no clear solution was provided except false promises.
I would like to bring to your notice that it has been a few days and no resolution has been provided hence I request you to provide me with a replacement of the tv as the product is still unused and covered under warranty.
I look forward to your response and speedy resolution.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to report a fa...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and speedy resolution. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78461538462 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6965485525 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8819563654 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168285268828 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576651445831 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343588190654 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802366547512 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345176742888 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.