Letter number 30
You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter - describe who you are going to marry, - tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule), - explain why it’s important him/her be at the wedding.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to my marriage which is planned for 15th November 2020. I know you are enthusiastic about attending an Indian ceremony and believe me, you will enjoy every function before and after the ceremony.
My fiancé, Veena, is an IT professional in CTS and is working in Kochi location. After the marriage, she is also planning to shift to Canada with me. We met last year at my cousin’s wedding, and we had an instant liking. Later on, I approached her parents through my parents, and they agree with the proposal. So I would say that this is an arranged-cum- love marriage affair.
It would be best if you came one week before the wedding day, as we have a ring exchange ceremony on 10th November. Also, there will be “Mehendi” function at the bride’s home fortnight, so we all will visit to attend the function, these are very interesting, and you too can enjoy the taste of traditional Indian culture. Finally, on the day of the wedding, we will be traditional attire and will tie a knot and take holy vows. Later on, we will take her to our home.
I heard that you are doing some research in Traditional Indian culture. You must attend this function as it would give you a hands-on experience. Later on, you can plan to visit some tourist location as there are a lot of places to visit and my cousin will accompany you.
Hoping to see you at the wedding
Yours lovingly
Rahul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...ter the ceremony. My fiancé, Veena, is an IT professional in CTS and is working in K...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53113553114 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53910367217 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6026652354 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3125 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204492050545 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712292841723 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470294594602 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127099521899 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581926505311 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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