YOU ARE GETTING MARRIED . WRITE A LETTER TO AN ENGLISH SPEAKING FRIEND TO INVITE HIM/HER TO THE WEDDING. IN YOUR LETTER
- DESCRIBE WHO YOU ARE GOING TO MARRY.
- TELL WHAT WILL HAPPEN ON THE WEDDING DAY (SCHEDULE)
- EXPLAIN WHY IT IS IMPORTANT FOR HIM/HER TO BE AT THE WEDDING
Dear Sarah,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am getting married on 5th March 2011 and I am writing this letter to formally invite you to the wedding. You always wanted to attend an Indian wedding and believe me you are going to enjoy all ceremonies that are attached with the actual wedding ceremony.
My fiancé, Tarun Sharma, is working with Dell International as a senior web developer. We met at my cousin’s wedding 6 months ago for the first time and we had an instant liking for each other. He approached my parents through his parents and so it is an arranged-cum-love-marriage affair.
You must come one week in advance because on 28th February, we have the ring ceremony and on 1st March there is the ‘Ladies Sangeet’. It is a very interesting celebration in which you will get to taste a lot of folk culture of Punjab. Then we have the ‘Mehandi’ ceremony on the 3rd March and finally the great wedding day on the 5th. You know in a traditional Hindu wedding, the priest lights up a fire around which the bride and groom circle and take holy vows. After the ‘Doli’ ceremony, I shall leave my parents home to go to my new home with my husband.
You are my best friend and I also heard you are doing a research on the Indian Tradition and Culture. Therefore it is very important for you to attend the wedding so you get a first hand experience of many things. After the wedding, you are welcome to stay with my parents for some time and my younger sister shall take you around to see some tourist spots.
Hoping to see you at the wedding!
Yours with love,
Kiran.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...t friend and I also heard you are doing a research on the Indian Tradition and Culture. Th...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ch on the Indian Tradition and Culture. Therefore it is very important for you to attend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52013422819 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70790399027 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.922478051 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263413700651 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944265950363 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658658328072 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168695342404 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745907033172 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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