Friday, August 28th, 2020
Dir Sir,
I am writing this letter to show my appreciation about your great performance of yesterday concert and discuss with you possible future plan for our assistance and collaboration.
As for your performance, I really felt impressed and touched. You not only sang beautifully but the musical accompaniment you made along with your songs sounded so amazing. I thought you were not just singing but really communicating with the audience.
In my city we have a music club, meeting every Sunday to sing together and share ideas and tips regarding performing. So could you please support us in one way or another?
We would appreciate it if you can spare your time to join us at the club occasionally. Or if our physical distance does not allow we can have online conferences from time to time. We could benefit a lot thanks to your sharing about how to attract audience and make beautiful music accompaniments.
I hope you agree with our suggestions. I am looking forward to receiving your reply. Thank you so much.
Best regards,
Your passionate fan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, regarding, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89218276947 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.587290794 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0229690555984 0.216113520407 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00594290586996 0.0766984524023 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205868298228 0.0603063233224 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0144913698636 0.12726935374 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032403688102 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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