Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that continuing to study at university or college is the best way to promise of a successful career. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that working right after school is much better, I would have to support the idea that keeping on learning at university or college students could have a big chance to apply for a job.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why people should have a tendency of choosing to continue education after high school. Firstly, graduating from university, people will probably get higher salary than those without university education. In fact, these days, most employers expect more qualifications. Furthermore, the job market is becoming more and more competitive, so that it is an obvious benefit to people who get higher education degree.
On the other hand, I also think that working straight after high school is beneficial in some ways. First of all, young people are able to earn more money as soon as possible. They can live independently on their own income. However, besides the merit I mention above, jumping straight into work after high school also has drawbacks. The biggest problem is that you will have less time available to do any things in your life. For instance, worker have to work eight hours a day or even twelve or fourteen hours, so they could do many outdoor activities.
In conclusion, it seem to me that both of the views have several advantages and drawbacks. From my perspective, graduating from a university or college with a high school diploma, an employee might get an occupation more easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86715867159 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67659720562 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9538132829 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299779309257 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898014666392 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781893213346 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172220117143 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752570788674 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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