Dear Anna,
I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to inform about a storm that happened around your residential area while you are visiting Korea with children and husband for vacation.
I hope by this time, you may have got the information by the mean news about this unfortunate disaster. As I m taking care of your apartment in your absence, I was in the kitchen for breakfast when the storm started around 11.00 am in the morning and last for around three hours, by the god grace nothing serious happened to the house and I am safe too. As per now, the flight is banned until the situation becomes normal.
Although, one part of the balcony is wall broken and the garage door is also damaged a bit, apart from this a few household items also got destroyed some by winds including television, one glass table, and some artifacts or showpieces.
Along with that, things which need to be repaired are a few fissures on wall and roof are apparent and widen now, also paint on doors and windows, with balcony and garage area. Meanwhile, I will look for some basic help around. Hope to see you soon, and give my best to the family.
Best Regards,
Shona
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h children and husband for vacation. I hope by this time, you may have got the...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
...ast when the storm started around 11.00 am in the morning and last for around three hours, by the...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon, and give my best to the family. Best Regards, Shona
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55707762557 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30379664757 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62100456621 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6603595022 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156780427777 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506065175599 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481644334094 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925856667674 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549827144785 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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