Dear Emily,
Hope you are enjoying your vacations in Singapore. I am horrified to tell you about the storm that hit the city last night and it even damaged some items of your apartment.
I can feel how awful it is to come to know about the damage especially when you are enjoying your holidays. It was midnight when I was sleeping downstairs when this storm hit the apartment, despite the weather report which was showing a clear day. Unfortunately, it has broken one of the glass windows of the house from which the rainwater ran inside and damaged a part of floor carpet mostly the corner near the window.
You not to have worried as I tried my best to handle the situation by removing all the broken glass pieces from the floor and also tried to dry out the carpet but could not get success. In addition to this, I also called the serviceman to replace the window glass. When you come back, we will go to the market to buy a new floor carpet for you.
See you soon. Take care.
Best wishes,
Tarun
- More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problemfor wealthy countries.Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer, andinclude any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experie 78
- Today, the younger and older generations are in the same workplace. Is this more an advantage or more disadvantage? 67
- Nowadays, young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in 73
- There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples. 84
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Is it advantageous or disadvantageous? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44919786096 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24769479428 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620320855615 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2939260831 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17152756897 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590696604038 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058349855971 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104522093689 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704135496222 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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