There is a trend of increasing amount of noise in our life. Why could this be a problem? What can be done to reduce it? Give your own opinion support it with examples.
During the last few decades, noise pollution has become a worrying trend that looks set to continue. With the advancement of technology, overusing of technical devices such as radio, loudspeakers, and mobiles has become a problem, as it not only causes sound pollution but also emit hazardous radiations which can beget hypertension and even early loss of hearing power. Many solutions can be adapted to reduce the effect which demands public awareness and avoiding over-using technical equipment.
With the increase in noise from morning to night, human ears are constantly bombarded with some sort of noises. Due to this, it has been seen that even youngsters are facing several mental health problems such as hypertension and disability of hearing power which earlier only affected after a certain age. For example, in inner cities the prevalence of depression amongst young people is even greater because of using mobile devices in excess which emits health effecting radiations. Researchers have proven that consistently exposure to the noise can even cause brain tumors and high blood pressure.
To combat the effect of increasing amount of noise, along with education, awareness should also be raised. Videos and picture help to visually present unfortunate circumstances that noise pollution can create, evoking emotional responses that will inspire others to take action to control the noise. This can be done through advertisement and media. It should also understood by every individual to stop over-using any loudspeakers for every small purposes, as it is one of the important cause of noise pollution in some countries.
To conclude, plans and rule should be set forth to legalize the limit on noise-creating devices such as loudspeakers and also awarenessing public about the problems caused. If the government implemented these steps, it will be easy to control noise pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'understand'
Suggestion: understand
...advertisement and media. It should also understood by every individual to stop over-using ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41077441077 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84105262139 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5911319291 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.615384615 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224214935192 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872465767132 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620532086225 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135675524195 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292119896819 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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