A local magazine editor has asked for readers opinion. Write a letter to the magazine editor.
In the letter, you should tell:
what made you choose this magazine
why you like and dislike about it
what improvements you want to see.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am glad to know that you are welcoming valuable feedback from your magazine readers and It gives me immense pleasure to share my suggestions by this letter.
I have been reading your esteemed magazine "Path to Success" for two years. It is due to my friend who strongly recommended me to read this when I was going through a hard time of my life and lost all my self-esteem. I gave it a shot and to my surprise, It had brought positivity and all new perspective to live a life.
It is an incredible magazine. The success stories and motivational articles you publish in your magazine are highly commendable. It really inspires and hopes up people like me who give up their hopes. However, I feel that not everyone can subscribe to this journal due to the exorbitant price. It would be great If you can cut down its cost a bit.
As far as improvements are concerned, It would be worth to include one section to mention positive lifestyle changes such as sustainable and balanced diet, meditation and fitness that one can bring to live a prosperous life, which I think is everyone is looking for in this hustle and bustle.
I hope that you would take my suggestions into consideration!
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
- Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.In your letter, you should tell:– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased. 70
- Many families move to different countries Some people think children can benefit from this while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country Discuss both views and your opinion 95
- In some countries children under 16 years old are not allowed to leave school by law and get full time work Is this a good or bad thing Discuss your opinion 67
- Your company has recently introduced new uniform for the staffs Write a letter to your manager that you are not happy with the new uniform Explain why you are not happy with the new uniform What you want new uniform to be like Giving some suggestions 67
- As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic.In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, inother countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.To what extent should children have to follow rules 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, i feel, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72398190045 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86557910032 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5195272885 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9090909091 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173998367712 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634414723133 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615713059387 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106677899109 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631451945931 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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