You have seen an advertisement for a part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
describe your experience.
tell him why you are interested in the job.
say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time job at your restaurant for the role of assistant manager. I came to know that your restaurant needs an assistant manager for evening hours through an advert published in employment newsweekly.
My name is Ell Green and I am pursuing masters in business administration at the University of Texas, which is one of the top universities of the world. In addition to this, I also hold a one-year diploma certificate in hotel management.
I am allowed for 20 hours of part-time work per week during my study and It would be a wonderful opportunity for me to work for you and gain real work experience. Moreover, your restaurant is in the vicinity of my campus and It would be convenient for me to work in late evening hours.
As you are looking for sincere candidates, I assure you that I would work diligently and would stand by your expectations by providing excellent service. Please find enclosed my CV and I would be happy to provide references from my college professor and members of the community.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92702921065 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3766459757 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380769027123 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139785425046 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113023275183 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186602295269 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111399993202 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.