A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article call "The book that influenced me most".
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most.
In your letter
describe what this book was about
explain how this book influenced you
say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.
Dear Sir Madam,
I am writing letter regarding the impressive article which you have printed in your last week magazine. Nowadays, your magazine is getting very popular in all ages group. Particularly, it is creating significant impact on younger generation.
Furthermore, I would like to point out important aspect of an article named as "The book that influenced me most". While reading above article, I was over the nine clouds. Because all of my childhood memories revised, once I start reading the article. Moreover, article influenced me in multiple ways, to cite an example, paragraph mentioned all various points. Such as,
Adventure in student life, discipline, school timetable, chat with classmates, speech of teachers. I clearly remember that, once I completed article, I could not stop my emotion and, I started crying.
Additionally, I referred the same article to my most of friends and, they have felt same kind of feeling while reading the article. One of my friends posted his views on social media, within 24 hours he achieved 5 thousand likes and comments. According to my school learning, above article should be published in all national newspapers. So, all the persons can feel the mesmerizing experience. Also, I would enhance popularity of magazine in all generation.
Consequently, I determined that, "The book that influenced me most" article has influenced large number of person and counter of impressive people will definitely increase in future.
Specifically, I would like to thank you for publishing the wonderful article.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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| 2022-07-22 | kuldip.kumar@hotmail.com | 84 | view |
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h mentioned all various points. Such as, Adventure in student life, discipline, s...
^^^
Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the friends') or simply say ''most friends''.
Suggestion: most of the friends; most friends
...ally, I referred the same article to my most of friends and, they have felt same kind of feelin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ressive people will definitely increase in future. Specifically, I would like to thank y...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.456 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98841496449 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5904905887 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207721821332 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532920688034 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641554457746 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997683471399 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692651354813 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h mentioned all various points. Such as, Adventure in student life, discipline, s...
^^^
Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the friends') or simply say ''most friends''.
Suggestion: most of the friends; most friends
...ally, I referred the same article to my most of friends and, they have felt same kind of feelin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ressive people will definitely increase in future. Specifically, I would like to thank y...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.456 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98841496449 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5904905887 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207721821332 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532920688034 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641554457746 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997683471399 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692651354813 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.