Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school, some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In many countries, especially the developed ones, commuting is reportedly much more time-consuming than the last few decades. While many people support the idea that it can only bring negative effects, numerous others lean more on its merit. From my perspective, commuting has both advantages and drawbacks
To begin with, there is a variety of benefits that longer trips to work or school brings. First and foremost, it is a suitable time for self-reflection. There seem to be shreds of evidence that people nowadays are too hectic and always up to their ears. Therefore, driving to work can be an excellent recreational activity for them to unwind and re-energize themselves. Furthermore, commuting by public means of transportation is a valuable opportunity to pursue several interests. Reading, movie watching or even taking a nap, to mention but a few. Another advantage of increasing traveling time is to diminish the pressure on urbanization. Living far from workplaces or academies to some extent may synonymous with dwelling on the outskirts or in the countryside, which irrefutably eases the demand of population in the hustle and bustle downtown areas. On the other hand, it may boost the development of services and create numerous occupations in these places.
Nevertheless, the disadvantage the raising time traveling to and fro should not be underestimated. First of all, traveling for such a long time can be quite fatiguing both mentally and physically. Driving tasks undoubtedly required alertness and highly concentration since a small mistake can lead to terrible traffic pile-up. In the second place, longer driving time may be jacking up the transportation fees. Various families are struggling to pay for expenses such as gasoline or the warranty costs, which may lead them to fall into financial challenges. This tendency, together with the increase in prices, are added more weights into low-income workers and students who depends on their parents
To sum up, the longer traveling time is the inevitable consequence of reducing pressure on urban development and it is the right time for self-interests. But it also can lead to mental and physical worn out and several financial burdens for lower classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, while, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 26.3917525773 193% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 937.175257732 201% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 355.0 206.0 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30985915493 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09699830998 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 127.690721649 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 290.88556701 202% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1303867105 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.722222222 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 4.34317383033 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209018681643 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055550966709 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552784513831 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126176613305 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647481146717 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 41.2886597938 266% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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