Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family thant eating out in restaurants or canteens.
do you agree or disagree?
A simple recognition to the finding of researchers, it’s obviously evident while many people subscribe to cooking and eating at home whether alone or not, other prefer to eat in restaurants and cafes. even though eating in restaurants sounds fascinating, I totally agree to make cook and eat it at home.
Firstly, cooking at home brings you a wide list of foods to choose. Besides, all the ingredients are used in foods are surely without any bacteria and are clean.
Secondly, fast-food is highly cost. Despite of expensive foods their qualities are declining. While people could spend those money to have a perfect meal at homes with cheaper prices.
Furthermore, addicting to have a meal at restaurants brings people nothing but obesity, blood-pressure matters, even some times stroke. Since the quality of oil and material which are used in outdoor foods are doubtfully healthy, sometimes about half people who eat at kind of place have serious body problems that take long to counteract and curb them.
To conclude, despite of this fact that many individuals and families using restaurants foods to not waste time in their daily life, many people believe the more amount of home foods, the healthier population. Also, it is needless to indicate Family members gather together to assemble a dish and it makes the family relationships stronger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...prefer to eat in restaurants and cafes. even though eating in restaurants sounds fas...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve foods their qualities are declining. While people could spend those money to have ...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...are declining. While people could spend those money to have a perfect meal at homes with ch...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, even so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17194570136 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72295947499 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8205598122 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335958454411 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115769216542 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105991146917 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168219431146 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11122049198 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.