Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past
Being a parent means that you've risen to a new stage and huge responsibilities. Ways of parenting differentiate from a person to another, they either do it the old ways or the new ways but mostly there are things that limit their abilities and time.
These days modern lifestyles mostly take over parenting and affect it badly by parents not having much time to be with their children, and that leads to many other things. Both parents would be working at almost the same time and that results in not having enough time to stay and do the usual activities parents do with their children. For example, parents wouldn't be around their children so children would have to stay alone and that could result in them to be lazy or even have depression.
On the other hand the old ways of parenting, most parents used to have much more time than these days.
They would be around their children and eat breakfast, lunch, and dinner together with them. Usually, on weekends they would go out together to have a meal and do activities together, like swimming, playing soccer, and even simple games like tag.
Moreover, I think that parents should always be with their children and organize their time. Because not staying that much with their children will make the children suffer and affect them physically and mentally. And parents should do their best to be with their children no matter what the situation is. Because in the end, they would regret not staying much with them as they're the most amazing thing in the world.
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 76
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ld regret not staying much with them as theyre the most amazing thing in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 5.05154639175 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30842986397 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5633728937 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47733512677 0.216113520407 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202243418397 0.0766984524023 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102336904471 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245539031586 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129930569098 0.0580467560999 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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