A new neighbor has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin.
Write a letter to your new neighbor requesting that they return the item. In the letter:
– Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council
– Request that the person returns your bin immediately
– Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this to bring your kind attention to the main rubbish bin, which you have taken from my front yard. This is about that last week Monday when you arrived and took my bin to your house as told by my daughter.
However, I would like to notify you that <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8B7CD81F71924CAFE275AD55614C0082" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I must request the new bins" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the new bins must be requested" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the new bins </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8B7CD81F71924CAFE275AD55614C0082" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I must request the new bins" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the new bins must be requested" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">must be</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-8B7CD81F71924CAFE275AD55614C0082" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="I must request the new bins" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the new bins must be requested" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> requested</pwa> from the local council and suggest you <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BFDC430F41E0FB05C104E36D1219CCE7" data-pwa-rule-id="SPLT_INFI" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Split infinitive. Some people strongly object to this type of construction, especially in formal writing. If your reader is likely to object to the split infinitive, rewrite the sentence to avoid its use." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to kindly be" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">to </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BFDC430F41E0FB05C104E36D1219CCE7" data-pwa-rule-id="SPLT_INFI" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Split infinitive. Some people strongly object to this type of construction, especially in formal writing. If your reader is likely to object to the split infinitive, rewrite the sentence to avoid its use." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to kindly be" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">kindly</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-BFDC430F41E0FB05C104E36D1219CCE7" data-pwa-rule-id="SPLT_INFI" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Split infinitive. Some people strongly object to this type of construction, especially in formal writing. If your reader is likely to object to the split infinitive, rewrite the sentence to avoid its use." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="to kindly be" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> be</pwa> in touch with them. Also, if you could return my bins on the earliest that would be great of you, as it is almost impossible for me to manage my garbage and my family <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-802D3B0E3FE91C9C9F8EFD45372039EA" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is concerned" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">is concerned</pwa> about the contamination spread from the trash.
I am afraid that I might end up complaining about this incidence to the local council if <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-B6D838CFDF6A5D802472242E66EFEFE2" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="they do not return the bins~I do not return the bins~it does not return the bins~we do not return the bins" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the bins are not returned" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the bins are not returned</pwa> on priority. So, kindly take the necessary steps to fix this matter at our own end to ignore any kind of trouble and maintain harmony.
Yours sincerely,
Amit Padam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1197, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead.' da...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, kind of, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4511.0 937.175257732 481% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 437.0 206.0 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.3226544622 4.54256449028 227% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.0101792726 2.54303337028 472% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402745995423 0.622605031667 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1186.2 290.88556701 408% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.41237113402 191% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.372777157 44.8134815571 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.611111111 76.5299724578 327% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 24.2777777778 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 7.41237113402 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061982284561 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438069227722 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441795966429 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900913355341 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412248287386 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.3 8.37731958763 469% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -45.94 70.7449484536 -65% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 3.82989690722 415% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.6 7.45979381443 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 42.87 8.71597938144 492% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 8.62886597938 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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