You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you left your wallet there.
write a letter to your friend, In the letter
Thank your friend for the holiday.
Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Jay,
Hi, it must surprise you why am I writing to you so soon? We have just departed from each other a few hours ago. Well, first, thank you so much for such a wonderful holiday. Believe me, I thoroughly enjoyed every part. I think we both had a blast.
Basically<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-E6842D6A840FF84532CF32429DFAE635" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1041" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word=", I am writing to let you know that" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">, I am writing to let you know that</pwa>, I left my wallet at your place. Remember, I gave it to you at the airport to put it in your hand baggage as I was not carrying the one. I supposed to take that back from you but while signing off but it just slipped from my mind. I discovered it when I had to pay for the taxi tariff after reaching home.
Anyhow, it's not that late. You can send it to me via express delivery at my home address and don't forget to mention my personal contact number. If you do it today, it will reach me by tomorrow.
Missing you already!
Yours truly,
Kanika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry part. I think we both had a blast. Basically
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...riff after reaching home. Anyhow, its not that late. You can send it to me vi...
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Line 13, column 94, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...express delivery at my home address and dont forget to mention my personal contact n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, i suppose, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73821989529 4.54256449028 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.33739326908 2.54303337028 289% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.891093541 44.8134815571 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 84.3076923077 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200563980296 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951026053985 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787389097644 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151524971126 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392545606666 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 8.71597938144 177% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.