one of our friends live in another country you want to spend some time working in that country right a letter to your friend.
- described why you want to work in that country -tell him about skill and experience
- ask some other question related to work
Dear divine
I hope you are good in health,am writing this letter to get information about your living country canada.As you know i am working in IT company as a manager.You surprise to know that yesterday i received a letter about my training that will be for two years at your living country.So i will come very soon in canada .
My training hours in weekend morning 11:00am to 5:00pm and the rest of the days i will be free. So i made a plan to do part time job in those day.Thus i will gain more experience and and it will be a great opportunity for me to improve my communication skills and my working experiences.I want to request you kindly guide me about the vacancy and the working rule i want to do a part time job monday to friday i have done btech in civil engineer i have also ten years experience as a manager please guide me how can i get a job offer easily and which type of question the interviewer can ask from me .
Please send me the details how i apply for job and which area i will easily received a job offer and guide me the rule and the regulations of the jobs and the contract so i will be able to do my best i am looking forward your response.
your friend
Jass
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , am
...r divine I hope you are good in health,am writing this letter to get information ...
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...mation about your living country canada.As you know i am working in IT company as...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
... i will be free. So i made a plan to do part time job in those day.Thus i will gain more...
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'those days'?
Suggestion: this day; those days
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...e day.Thus i will gain more experience and and it will be a great opportunity for me t...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... about the vacancy and the working rule i want to do a part time job monday to fr...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ncy and the working rule i want to do a part time job monday to friday i have done btech ...
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...ce as a manager please guide me how can i get a job offer easily and which type o...
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Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...question the interviewer can ask from me . Please send me the details how i apply...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...om me . Please send me the details how i apply for job and which area i will eas...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
...ly for job and which area i will easily received a job offer and guide me the rule and t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...lations of the jobs and the contract so i will be able to do my best i am looking...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ontract so i will be able to do my best i am looking forward your response. you...
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...t i am looking forward your response. your friend Jass
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g forward your response. your friend Jass
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1645021645 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47761069817 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 16.3608247423 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.16666344 44.8134815571 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.4 76.5299724578 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.2 16.8248392259 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 2.54639175258 1217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195676965439 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10501192087 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843887948764 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121271401902 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844210696351 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 8.37731958763 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.17 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.74 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 8.54432989691 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.