One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business
Write a letter to reply to your friend’s offer. In your letter
• Give your opinion of your friends business idea
• Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept his offer
• And explain your reasons for his decision.
Dear Aman,
Hello, hope you are happy and healthy. I've been so busy that I only just got round to replying your letter now.
Firstly, I would like to appreciate your business idea of opening a Coaching Centre for secondary education. It's a great idea of imparting knowledge to students and that too at low prices.
As you know that I always take time to decide upon things and finally comes up with a clear decision. So, I'm delighted to say a big 'YES' to your offer. Afterall it feels so great being a business partner of a person who is such a gentleman.
The main reason of accepting this business offer is that I've blind faith in you because since we became friends you have never let me down at any point of time. It's always a pleasure to be with you.
Looking forward to catching up again.
Best wishes,
Sandy
P.S. Waiting for your response
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... Hello, hope you are happy and healthy. Ive been so busy that I only just got round...
^^^
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...oaching Centre for secondary education. Its a great idea of imparting knowledge to ...
^^^
Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lly comes up with a clear decision. So, Im delighted to say a big YES to your offe...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...lighted to say a big YES to your offer. Afterall it feels so great being a business part...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...f accepting this business offer is that Ive blind faith in you because since we bec...
^^^
Line 8, column 162, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...never let me down at any point of time. Its always a pleasure to be with you. L...
^^^
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p again. Best wishes, Sandy P.S. Waiting for your response
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, look, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52229299363 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29014330983 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71974522293 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4309945091 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5454545455 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325517105016 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098044750218 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647556400893 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140861462349 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684751210759 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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