One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend
In the letter, you should
describe why you want to work in that country
tell him/her about your skills and experience
ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
Dear Shilpa,
I am fine, hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that next month, i will coming in India for job and i have to stat approximate 6 months.
Actually, my first priority was to found job in the city Delhi and experienced to work love to do work in the Taj Hotel, where i yet applied and lucky, I got that opportunity as a Head chef. As you know, in Canada i have 2 years experienced to work as a chef in the cuisine.
My reason to choose to do work in India because I being very curious to know about Indian food whenevr i eat the food in Indian restaurant anywhere. Everytime I felt It was Awsome and Moreover delicious. So i looked at the Online recipies and tried Canada where i working now. Surprisingly the result are unpredictable. Most of the people liked my recipie. It is my passion to learn different items regarding food. They offered me Very good package which I canot ignored. I will do work there, but If the place. Suits me than definately I Continues to stay ove there for work, Meanwhile please you give me your opinion and some suitable suggestion.
I look forward to hearing your reply.
Many thanks,
HM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Shilpa, I am fine, hope you are doing well. I am...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s letter to inform you that next month, i will coming in India for job and i have...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...r to inform you that next month, i will coming in India for job and i have to stat app...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y was to found job in the city Delhi and experienced to work love to do work in t...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...n to choose to do work in India because I being very curious to know about Indian...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rious to know about Indian food whenevr i eat the food in Indian restaurant anywh...
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t was Awsome and Moreover delicious. So i looked at the Online recipies and tried...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... Online recipies and tried Canada where i working now. Surprisingly the result ar...
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Line 7, column 540, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: Continue
...f the place. Suits me than definately I Continues to stay ove there for work, Meanwhile p...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing your reply. Many thanks, HM
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4331797235 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54491392559 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7303692669 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180387098273 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494513409821 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499936908087 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107058995754 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124621144993 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.