Dear xyz,
I am writing this letter to offer you belated birthday wishes as well as my apologies to be unable to attend your birthday party.
Honestly speaking, I had planned to visit you on your birthday, but had to change my schedule, due to a job interview call. As you are aware, how important this interview call is for me, you might understand my helplessness to not accompany you on your birthday. So, after getting call, I had to make preparations for my interview to be conducted on the same day.
Besides this, I really feel sorry for not informing you as I thought, being my best friend, you will get concerned about my interview rather than focusing on your celebration. I did not want to divert your mind.
Moreover, I am sending a latest book of your favourite author as your birthday gift, with this letter. Hopefully, you won't keep any grudges and will understand me.
I assure you to visit you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear xyz, I am writing this letter to offer you be...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...rt your mind. Moreover, I am sending a latest book of your favourite author as...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, honestly, if, moreover, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64970557343 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7539161051 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414716233566 0.216113520407 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182680302242 0.0766984524023 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836089782383 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254929772785 0.12726935374 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153174404909 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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