Immunization of children is a wide spread discussion topic among the common people as well as policy makers across the world. Whether vaccination has to be made mandatory for every child or parents should be exempted from this compulsion is a debatable issue. Undoubtedly, the rate of occurence of fatal diseases among infants has been tackled through vaccines and drops to a great extent. Therefore, it should be enforced and encouarged among the people by adopting different strategies.
To begin with, in most of the countries, it costs nothing or a negligible amount of money to get your child vaccinated as these campaigns are run by government aided funds. The ultimate goal is to make the community disease free as healthy citizens are the assests for the country. So, parents should themselves be enthusiastic enough to get advantage of these facilities if they are really concerned about their child's well-being.
Additionally, infancy death rate is a major problem among many societies which in turn affects the ratio of man power and youth of the nation. Therefore, if government has to take concrete steps to overcome it, implementation of strict laws for immunity enhancement procedures are needed. Prevention is definitely better than cure which can be achieved through such initiatives.
On the contrary, some people have the opinion that instead of forcing people to get their children vaccinated, awareness should be spread on a massive scale. For illustration, in developing countries such as India, China and many others, numerous projects are started to eradicate the diseases which mostly attack people in their childhood. For this purpose, media, press, social media and theatre play a prominant role in highlighting the benefits of vaccination and people understand the importance of it.
In my opinion, both the approaches should be considered as per the situation in the society by the government. On the other hand, people should participate willingly in any effort made by leaders for the safety of their children inspite of being suspicious of such move.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27245508982 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89856390347 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0354499788 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.4 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331725845132 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993714648201 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619707820381 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16979359611 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503125868338 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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