One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn’t attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– explain why you missed it
– explain why you didn’t tell your friend
– and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry
Dear Mathew,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. Firstly I am sorry for not being able to attend your birthday celebration as I had to travel overseas.
To elucidate as you are aware that my reporting manager has resigned on short notice and hence the company management has given some additional responsibilities to me for interim duration till they find a suitable replacement thus it has led to an increase of work pressure in the past few weeks. Since I was in China for a business conference last week I totally forgot to communicate with you and hence missed your birthday party.
hence I would like to apologize for it and would like to host a party at my residence where I will be inviting all my friends. it will be a great opportunity to meet our old friends and on the other hand, celebrate your birthday.
I look forward to your response and seeing you soon.
Warm Wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...d hence missed your birthday party. hence I would like to apologize for it and wo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...d hence missed your birthday party. hence I would like to apologize for it and wo...
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Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...here I will be inviting all my friends. it will be a great opportunity to meet our...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse and seeing you soon. Warm Wishes Ben
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Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and seeing you soon. Warm Wishes Ben
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, look, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64589707847 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4648607658 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288758190761 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128602608525 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962571847471 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188752417498 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774362065876 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.