Dear Mr Walker,
I regret to inform you that I can no longer maintain my full-time student membership with your club from next month onwards. I am Chris Wong and I have paid the monthly membership fees by direct from my bank.
This club has given me numerous benefits by providing actives, such as yoga classes that I really fond of, as well as the swimming pool and gymnasium. I have thoroughly enjoyed my club membership as it also provided me with useful opportunities to meet up with other young people.
However, my studies are now coming to an end, and I will be returning to my home country recently. I have no words to fill my sorrow over this decision, but I feel this is just the softest way to communicate my decision. Therefore, I regret that I no longer wish to continue my membership and I would like you to confirm the monthly fee will no longer be deducted from my bank account.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Chris Wong
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, really, so, therefore, well, i feel, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57062146893 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58363255952 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9298492989 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197780786149 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871012118857 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437440555483 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130819577359 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443238512961 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.