Dear Mr Brown,
I hope you and your family are all well. I am an Indian student of English Literature and as a part of this curriculum, I am coming to U K next month. My sheer purpose is to attend the English and Homestay programme there and for which I will be staying with your family. My agent suggested to live at your home since you people are very kind and humble. Also, he mentioned that you have vast knowledge about this country which is crucial for me.
Therefore, it would be great, if you can enlighten my mind by providing some pivotal data for instance, the rich history, culture and important festivals of this realm. In addition, I am very keen to know about the "Buckingham Palace" and the royal family residing there. Last but certainly not the least, please guide me to some of the best cuisines that are must try.
My flight is Jet Airways s-7066 that will arrive at 8 PM on Monday i.e. 21 December. I was told to inform you about my flight details so that it will be feasible for you to come to receive me from the airport. Rest of my details and contact number has been attached with this letter.
Thanking you in anticipation for kind assistance.
See you soon,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Brown, I hope you and your family are all well....
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested living'.
Suggestion: suggested living
...l be staying with your family. My agent suggested to live at your home since you people are very ...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Airways s-7066 that will arrive at 8 PM on Monday i.e. 21 December. I was told t...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on for kind assistance. See you soon, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50678733032 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51272635575 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0845489726 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197221642794 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676598200326 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407771452628 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109159835704 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519797030545 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.