On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.Write a letter to the insurance manager.In your letter:describe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insurance company what

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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item.

Write a letter to the insurance manager.
In your letter:

describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in connection with the lost camera which was covered under the insurance policy number 6567. During my recent visit to India, I lost my brand new Cannon 650M camera, while travelling in a train. It was 2018 model camera with dual lens system which costed me $250 and was covered under warranty for 2 years.

I was travelling to India on a vacation for two weeks from 1st June to 14 June this year. While there, a trip was planned for New Delhi to visit the Red Fort, for which we boarded the Metro from HSR layout. Since it was a weekday, the Metro was extremely crowded with office goers. Once deboarding the train, we realized that while trying to get off the train, I had lost the camera. The train had already departed by the time I had realized what had happened. I lodged an FIR at the local police station, but have not received any intimation regarding the camera. Fortunately for me, I had insured it at the time of purchase.

I would like you to go through my policy and help me complete all the formalities to get the cost reimbursed at the earliest. I have attached copies of all the documents related to insurance and warranty with this letter.

Looking forward for a prompt response from you.

Yours Faithfully
Aparna R

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it at the time of purchase. I would like you to go through my policy and hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55172413793 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40095106007 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8929233621 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4285714286 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176112407586 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622518502116 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558321046113 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119223424476 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428496464043 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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