You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Ms.Flannigan,
I am writing to inform you of my inability to attend the English language course which is due to start in the coming week. I was looking forward to start my classes but due to some unexpected health problem, am unable to. I sincerely regret the inconvenience this has caused you.
Let me explain my situation. I was walking down from work late last week and since it was pouring, the visibility was very poor. Just as I turned towards my apartment lane, I stepped into a pot-hole and lost control.. Unfortunately, I fell sideways on my right hand and broke it. Since it is a hairline fracture, I have been advised to take it slowly for next three weeks and not move it at all. Therefore, joining next week's class is next to impossible.
I will be consulting my doctor by the end of three weeks and would like to join post I get a clean chit. Since it would give me enough time to rest my hand, I would like to join by mid next-month. Please let me know if you could hold my registration until then.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Aparna R
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Flannigan
Dear Ms.Flannigan, I am writing to inform you of my in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nexpected health problem, am unable to. I sincerely regret the inconvenience this...
^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...stepped into a pot-hole and lost control.. Unfortunately, I fell sideways on my ri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.505 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69940271171 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5146175845 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3571428571 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224024155197 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801704673016 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747370993182 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147790233467 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788591613669 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.