On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter* describe the item you lost* explain how you lost it* tell the

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
* describe the item you lost
* explain how you lost it
* tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope you are doing well! My name is John and I am inscribing this missive regarding the loss of my personal laptop during my recent holiday to Goa. Last week, I was on vacation and had travelled to Goa with my family. During the vacation, I was also carrying my personal laptop to check my emails and have access to my lovely memories in the form of photos and videos. I had a wonderful vacation to Goa but eventually, it turned out to be terrible when I realized that I had lost my precious and personal laptop. On the last day of my holidays, when I had just boarded the flight I quickly realized that I do not have my laptop bag with me. I immediately called the hotel to check if I have forgotten it in the hotel room but the hotel reception apprised that the room service have diligently checked and unfortunately failed to discover it. I also contacted the cab services company but they have been unable to find it either.

Finally, I would request you to assist me in recovering the cost of the laptop which is covered under the travel insurance I had rightfully purchased as a component of my holiday package. Please request for any information which is essential to expedite the process. Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Regards,
John

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, regarding, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5988106767 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1798669995 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120236125688 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455565036072 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497153631563 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114551996592 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435051935672 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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