On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter •Describe the item you lost •Explain how you lost it •Tell th

Dear Sir/Madam,

I, Divyasree, am having travel insurance at Birla Insurance Company for four years. I am writing this letter to let you know about the laptop which I lost during my recent plane journey from Mumbai to Bangalore on 24th September 2019.

In detail, I purchased a silver Lenovo laptop with 32 inches and 18 GB RAM Processor, 2019 version in January from Croma Store, Hyderabad with INR 69,890. They had given me a guarantee and warranty card along with it, which was insured the next week at your main branch.

The incident occurred when an old man sitting beside me asked about the details of the laptop and I let him know about the latest features and price. During my departure at the airport, I found that my laptop was missing and I searched for it for more than an hour, which was in vain.

However, as per the insurance policy, it covers the cost of any lost item during the travel. Hence, I request you to approve my claim and compensate for the money. I am attaching a copy of the receipt with this letter.

I look forward to your favorable response.

Yours faithfully,
Divyasree

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Sir/Madam, I, Divyasree, am having travel insurance at Birla Insura...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38596143262 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5064353557 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2727272727 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20825486865 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781191950458 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869975972714 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119704361143 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123480761015 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.