Dear Sir,
I am writing to ask for information about hostel services to a group of eighteen students and four lecturers, all female staff.
I am Diva, the head of Stephen’s Medical College in Western Australia. We are organizing a medical trip to Snowy Mountains in South Wales from the 14th of August through 19th, 2019. We would like to take the accommodation for 5 nights during our stay. We do not mind sharing the rooms. But, the rooms must have hot water and room heater facilities considering the cold weather. Could you please send me the details about the breakfast, and lunch menu, and the types of accommodation available in the hostel through an email? Moreover, I would also request the cost of each room with double occupancy and details of the included facilities.
It would be highly appreciated if you could inform me at earliest but not later than three days.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Diva Stephen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmodation for 5 nights during our stay. We do not mind sharing the rooms. But, the...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...the rooms. But, the rooms must have hot water and room heater facilities considering ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92073170732 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69445279189 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707317073171 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8799806142 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205062375148 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065074053726 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592736992368 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117900933416 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03562293161 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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