It is ubiquitously seen that nowadays everyone is throwing away the used products if they are damaged or broken, in spite of getting it repaired. It is happening because of the modern lifestyle and higher income to buy things again and again. This tendency could be altered if the government take action upon their citizens by imposing extra taxes on every purchase so that the acquirer could stop buying the things, and instead get the items repaired.
In my perspective, there are many reasons for this trend. Firstly, due to technological advancements, people everywhere around the globe are living a modernized lifestyle, which does not require things to be recycled or repaired for further usage. Recent survey reports in the UK have shown that almost half of the population feel ashamed to go to the repair center, alternatively, they opt to buy a new model that arise in the market. Secondly, because every individual is working these days, they are financially sounded and independent which is making them lazier to get things repaired. To elucidate, these days, the youth are lazy, and moreover fascinated to show their high-class status by purchasing expensive products, even though they already have such an item which is in repair condition.
This tendency could be changed if the government of a nation imposes strict rules on its citizens. To begin with, they should urge huge taxes on every recycled product so that people may not show interest to buy them once again if broken. To illustrate, the government of Telangana has forced people to pay an 18% additional tax on the goods which could be recycled or repaired for which the sales of electronic goods have reduced to 40% according to the latest news.
To recapitulate, although products can be replaced by new ones because of people having enough money, this tendency could make them lazier than ever before which could be dangerous in the coming ages. However, this trend could be altered if the higher authorities impose high tariffs on every kind of product, either it might be technological devices, clothes, motor vehicles or accessories so that people tend not to buy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, kind of, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05586592179 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66361544278 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.087886586 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.230769231 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196326616654 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740563238535 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051327358576 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129117507626 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535675651325 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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