Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this.
In your letter, you should tell:
how you know about this city/town
what information was incorrect
what the editor should do about this.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring your attention to the incorrect information published about Nabha town in your daily newspaper, The Times.
As for how I am familiar with this town, I would like to tell you that I was born and brought up there in Nabha, and I often visit there to meet my parents. As I spent almost two decades there, I witnessed the expansion and development of this town very closely.
In the article in question, a journalist called Steve McAdam wrote about the infrastructure of this small town and particularly mentioned that students have to go out of town to pursue higher education due to no educational facilities in the area. On the contrary, there is a well-equipped government-funded college there, which was established in 1950.
Because this article conveys misinformation to readers, may I suggest you publish the retraction. I sincerely hope that a news agency like yours, which is well-respected for its news coverage would undertake not to repeat these types of errors, which could mislead readers.
I look forward to seeing you take prompt action in this regard.
Yours faithfully,
Ell
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| 2022-02-21 | Adlen DSouza | 100 | view |
| 2022-02-21 | Adlen DSouza | view | |
| 2021-09-01 | Ramandeep Dhaliwal | 61 | view |
| 2021-06-02 | Ell | 89 | view |
| 2021-06-02 | ankur25 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this regard. Yours faithfully, Ell
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, well, as for, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05759162304 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02233492092 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65445026178 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3647177873 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301257002716 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108924881569 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708870208436 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153835887697 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408057426876 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.