Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this.
In your letter, you should tell:
how you know about this city/town
what information was incorrect
what the editor should do about this.
I am writing this letter with respect to recent article 'Exploring Chandigarh' published in Hindustan Times on 31 September. There was some wrong information regarding the famous Rose garden.
I would definitely say that your article was worth reading due to its content and word choice. When, I was reading through the article, I found out that Date of annual fair was incorrect in journal. Actually, it is 2nd february instead of 4th February, on this day fair is organized each year. Well, I am sure about this data, as, I have great interest in plants and regularly visit Rose garden to admire its beauty. That's why, I think of correcting the whole information.
Could you edit your article and provide right information to readers in next edition. You can write rectification notice at the end of the article to amend the mistake.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finitely say that your article was worth reading due to its content and word choi...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le, I found out that Date of annual fair was incorrect in journal. Actually, it ...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...air was incorrect in journal. Actually, it is 2nd february instead of 4th Februa...
^^
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Well, I am sure about this data, as, I have great interest in plants and regu...
^^
Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...visit Rose garden to admire its beauty. Thats why, I think of correcting the whole in...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...mend the mistake. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Ram...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Raman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, regarding, so, well, i think, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87096774194 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62518023761 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703225806452 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9431969122 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314224957292 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962108215283 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604992090394 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171526539144 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631326253286 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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