Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial skills or should they promote education first?
Industrial era was begin in 18 century by British because of mass requirement of goods and day to day requirement of household items.Some people says education are the main reason why men started an era where goods were produce in mass production. Other says industrial skills do not required any education it require labor who work hard to achieve goals. In my Opinion, education are required for industrial skill.
Firstly, There is a reason why 18 century was so important in Britain era were all the world was in poverty and war. Britisher were improving their education competitively. By educating themselves they not only conquer half of the world but also better their economy by improving their industrial skills, Because world needs more goods as they where conquering the world. This is why they are the pioneer in the industrial era.
The reason they became worlds finest industrialist because they where advance in knowledge they know what tools are used best in the industries.
Secondly, But in now days mechanical labor are taking place of human labor but there are sometimes where mechanical labor crashed and stop work. In case human repair these mechanical labor so it can work properly again. It is possible when human labor are educated enough to repair robot labor.
The bottom line is education is important because by educating employee they can use their skill in fullest and beyond the imagination. This is how human has survive so far from the beginning of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02008032129 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60573564048 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3238490389 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174449225889 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771055399163 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629553842267 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990586641755 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450195044042 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.