Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Sponsoring sports events are considered the best bay of product marketing and branding nowadays. It influences many new companies to grow their business. well, some people say this is good, but others are not agreed with this statement. I would believe this as a good idea.
When company sponsor the events, sports equipment and uniforms; the organizers do not have to worry about the funding. Also, sometimes growing companies get a lot customers because of the famous sports has a myriad of viewers. for example, Jio Network by Reliance Industries provides T-shirts to each teams of IPL (Indian Premier League) and the IPL has a massive fan in India. That's how Jio achieved a lot of customers. Furthermore the company whose product are environment friendly and sustainable sends a good message to viewers and society and it helps to change the world to a better place. Giving an example to that, the Solarcoster Co. selling solar panels and everyone aware that solar power is sustainable, environmentally friendly and nonpolluted. When this company sponsored a football event, it draws millions of customers to make roof top of their house using solar panels and it saved a lot electricity.
On the downside, sometimes some companies whose product gives wrong influences on people. For instance, if a tobacco company advertises its product through the sewing their logo in uniform, then it sends a wrong message to society especially a lot of young people. In addition, the sport person put a great impression to his fans apparently. So events organizers must have to check that the events has a lot impacts on people especially young generations.
To conclude this sponsor sports events get them both the benefits. The business gets brand recognition, customers and generates its revenue and teams & organizers have not to worry about the funding. However sometimes wrong product does impact bad a lot on people and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 937.175257732 172% => OK
No of words: 316.0 206.0 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11392405063 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77415336948 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 290.88556701 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.189826477 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201895278972 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663375265792 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624788192522 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134844077171 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599866913679 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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