Some people feel that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Severe punishments always give second thought to criminal before committing crimes. While some people argue that there should be a fixed harsh punishment for every crime, I strongly agree with others who suggest to take circumstances into account when declaring punishment for each and every crime.
It is fact that, punishments such as death penalty and life imprisonment are often frighten to criminals. Accordingly, these punishments pressurize criminal activists to bar major crimes such as drugs & illegal arms trafficking and murders. It is said by some people that the main objective behind the same punishment for every crime helps to reduce it and save innocent people in society. For example, to save young women of America, a serial killer in U.S.A named Ted Bundy had been executed by US Court in 1989 for his mass murder of 30 women.
In my opinion, I would vigorously believe that persecuting a convict without knowing his/her aspects of situation and circumstance violates human rights. Firstly, consider all circumstances and proofs are a law of judiciary system. For instance, any criminal activist has right to express their positions, evidence and reasons behind crime. Therefore, it is crucial for judge to take all these views then finalizes verdicts. Secondly, some crimes are very minor and it is said that in some countries, there may be situations like lack of employment and poverty raise some people to commit crimes. For example, robbery.
In conclusion, I opine that punishment should be severe to save innocent people and make crime free society, although it should not be for every criminality. Perhaps, there must be examined every circumstance behind activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest taking'.
Suggestion: suggest taking
...crime, I strongly agree with others who suggest to take circumstances into account when declari...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...omen of America, a serial killer in U.S.A named Ted Bundy had been executed by US...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 1989 for his mass murder of 30 women. In my opinion, I would vigorously believ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26568265683 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76546600549 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0891005817 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358047234655 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108635416304 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10360811406 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236665640113 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10084157593 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.