Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, most people in the world intend to organize special events in their lives. While some people think that it plays a vital role in their lives, I side with those who believe that this activity will lead to money wastage.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why celebrating these events play a vital role for each individual. Firstly, due to this anniversary, we are able to save most moments until the times we will pass away, and it will never happen on the second times. Take weddings for example. It is the occasion that both bride and broom just only do some activities one time together. Secondly, it is an occasion when some people can create a relationship with someone they know. They also use this to tight bond the family, which is the most crucial factor for most of them.
However, celebrating these events can lead to financial issues for several reasons. The main reason is that some poorer families always have a monthly wage, which means that they feel these occasions are unessential. Instead of organizing it, if they want to get enough money, they will hold them via family, which is more necessary. On the other hand, they will spend an amount of money to prepare something for the event, such as decorating, meal, drink, and destination. As a result, those who celebrate it will face not only financial burdens but also the conflict between every member of the family.
To conclude, although some individuals believe that holding the anniversary is faced with fiscal problems, others think that it is essential to save the moment for everyone. However, I believe that we woud not need to organize this event in order to waste the budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 295.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7593220339 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36882461942 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9316960967 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215942911832 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728632452988 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521640696136 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133114149374 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105853513877 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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