Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this good or bad thing.
Undoubtedly, Sports and cultural events are the intrinsic part of nation and every civilian shows its diligent interest towards attending them. People spend an extortionate amount of money for watching live events to cherish those for the lifetime. However, some people argue that civilian should not invest exorbitantly on buying tickets just for the sake of entertainment, instead this extra amount can be used for other benefits of country. I agree that people should spend reasonably on events and should utilized money worthwhile.
The key reason which discourage the investment of money in big-budget event is that, it encourages the money minded people to take advantage of the tournament or ceremony by raising the price of hotels and transportation, because of which mediocre people cannot afford to attain such event. Moreover it ensue in the emergence of class difference in communities, which indirectly tear apart the nation. For example, in New Year time, there is increase in the price of hotels and transportation in every country that makes it difficult for any mediocre family to go outside and become part of it. Thus overprice event needs to be discouraged, so all people can involve in it and bring togetherness in society.
The other factor is that, the expensive ticket is not contributing in country growth, it only aid money in the organizers account, in spite of investing hefty amount in such event, these money can be donated for health and educational enhancement which will certainly help the nation to grow and achieve great goals.
To conclude, Cultural and sports event bring people together without a doubt, but paying huge amount of money for them cannot be justified, as it castigate the country. Therefore, these amount needs to be regulated so all civilian can afford it and can cherish those event with gratification.
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... civilian can afford it and can cherish those event with gratification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 937.175257732 167% => OK
No of words: 302.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18543046358 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79673351353 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1190475866 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.363636364 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179325654628 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729170556519 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048211621508 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111140857456 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516270878253 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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