Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, sports are the medium for the healthy and fit lifestyle, therefore, plays an intrinsic role in human life as well as in the community. However, there are few dangerous sports which have a negative impact on society and individual’s life, with these view in mind few people are against playing risky sports. I strongly believe that unsafe sports need to be prohibited in each country to ensure safety.
There are few risky sports which ensue in taking human life, not only players but spectator's as well. For an instance, the car racing is the game in which racer’s risk their lives to win the game but there are few incidences occurred previously in which racer lost the control on the speed and went off the track and unintentionally hit the boundaries. As a result, injured many viewers and took away few spectator’s life and in some cases the racers life. Therefore, the country needs to outlaw such hazardous sports that allow civilian to put there and other life at risk just for some money and entertainment.
Moreover, few sports are encouraging the destructive behavior in people and even in the young generation, which indirectly taking us towards inhumanity. For example, freestyle wrestling is a sport, as per which both opponent in a desire of win, try to harm each other that leads to severe injuries, in addition to that viewers get influenced by these kinds of the fight and act similarly in real life situations. Not only adult but the children also grasp everything and behave similarly. Henceforth, these high-risk sports had to be suppressed to avoid such impact on society.
To conclude, I strongly emphasize on the banishment of the sports which are unsafe for sportsman as well as its spectators and also don’t encourage any good behavior in the community. Legal prohibition will help the country to protect its humanity and will save the human’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'racers'' or 'racer's'?
Suggestion: racers'; racer's
...tator's life and in some cases the racers life. Therefore, the country needs to o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03134796238 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86583476723 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 290.88556701 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3299125512 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 4.34317383033 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115545929673 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475952748702 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352057769893 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075690526629 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394976581594 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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