Essay topics:
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviors. Other people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tect local herritage and culture. It is a obivious that if any countries try to e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 937.175257732 168% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53670253765 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 290.88556701 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8889968461 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6 76.5299724578 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.4 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218200884709 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978387586164 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525065895631 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131200249859 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473074530063 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 70.7449484536 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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