Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviors. Other people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
To start with, It has true that many countries are exepting cultural diversity and immigrants and visitors are welcomed for temporary and permenant stay. However, It is always a bias view whether it can change the cultural and heritage of host the host country or it will change according to possitive way where everyone has own values and respect. In this eassy, I will discuss both views with supporting arrguments and examples
According to some people's view, immigrants and visitors from the foreign counrty should be limited to protect local herritage and culture. It is a obivious that if any countries try to exept people from different origin there will be difference of stadard of living. For example, according to middle eastern conntries experts, after learning from minority people from Europian and American, local people are trying to following western culture and not more intrusted to follow basic retuals and values. As a result, there will be something diverse comunity will be there who could be responsible for countries's change of standard.
However, many nations are taking cultural value exchange as a positive way and always welcome for any community to stay and give freedom to change of value of cultural. For example, Country such as Canada ana United states of America have been accepting many people across the world where people have rights to spread thier culture and heritage to the different people and many supporting communities are also helping them. For example, immigrants from India has many organisations in the Canada to support their people to expand cultural values.
In a nutshell, After having both sides of views, I firmly believe that even though there will be minor issues for local but having different cultural and value will make a different environment and surrounding where everyone will have own repect and values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 937.175257732 168% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53670253765 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 290.88556701 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8889968461 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6 76.5299724578 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.4 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218200884709 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978387586164 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525065895631 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131200249859 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473074530063 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 70.7449484536 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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