The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action

Dear Sir

I'm writing this letter to make a complaint about the environmental pollution on my street. This is really affecting residents in the neighborhood and the situation gets worse by the day.

On my street there are different spots where we have very large waste bins that can accommodate all the trash of the residents and this is a great idea that was supposed to save us from this present situation. But due to the setback we experience on the end of the workers that come to empty the waste bin daily, we have a lot of waste littered all-around the street.

This makes it very unhealthy for people, also exposes them to various kinds of diseases including malaria and also causes traffic jam on the street too because the wastes are also on the road.

I'm suggesting that you look into this matter please to make us have a better environment in general by increasing your work force and also making available more waste bins to accommodate the wastes of the neighborhood.

I'll be expecting your feedback.

Yours faithfully, Michael Grant

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f waste littered all-around the street. ...
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...ecause the wastes are also on the road. ...
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... Yours faithfully, Michael Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62981796866 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0087461875 44.8134815571 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 110.125 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187347768958 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819140574038 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416755905664 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768378855255 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595083598579 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.