My name is faith Micheal, I am writing this letter concerning the environmental pollution in my street, 11B factory road London. I have lived in this area for a while now and this is the first time we are facing this type of environmental issues "pollution" and it is taking too long to fix.
The wastes buckets are usually dropped at the beginning and the end of the street sometimes in the middle for easy disposal of trash of people in the area and passerby, but recently the buckets have not been steady on the streets and it is really affecting the environment, as a matter of fact the bucket have not been put on the street for days now.
However, when these waste buckets are properly put in my street, people in the areas finds it easy to dispose their waste properly, but when they do not find the bucket, they dispose their waste inappropriately. This affects my health and it also causes a lot of traffic in the street, and makes me go to work late sometimes
I suggest the waste bucket should always be in the street and in the right positions to enable people in the street have easy access to dispose their waste properly.
I will be grateful if you act fast about the situation.
Yours faithfully
Faith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'bucket'.
Suggestion: bucket
...s taking too long to fix. The wastes buckets are usually dropped at the beginning an...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir waste properly, but when they do not find the bucket, they dispose their wast...
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Line 6, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and makes me go to work late sometimes I suggest the waste bucket should always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, while, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59192825112 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69170380241 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.997846824 44.8134815571 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 16.8248392259 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 4.34317383033 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18789722285 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934401986983 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442073114342 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111291451442 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027179919809 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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